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Prologue: Voren Family Massacre Ch 1 The Day Before the Awakening Part 1 - A Typical Morning in Brinewatch Ch 2 The Day Before the Awakening Part 2 - Lira Taryn Ch 3 The Day Before the Awakening Part 3 - Throne Wars & Family Time Ch 4 The Day of the Awakening Part 1 - Kael Awakens Ch 5: The Day of the Awakening, Part 2 - Psyche Dust Ch 6 The Day of the Awakening, Part 3 - Aftermath Ch 7 A New Beginning, Part 1 - First Customers Ch 8 A New Beginning, Part 2 - Dust Heads Attack Ch 9 Testing the Limits, Part 1 - A Big Fish Ch 10 Testing the Limits, Part 2 - Marks & Tests Ch 11 Testing the Limits, Part 3 - Trouble with the Competition Ch 12 The Soggy Bottom Boys Ch 13: Re:Test, Part 1—The Ascension Games Ch 14 Re:Test, Part 2—False Alarm Ch 15: A New Life, Part 1—Home & Job Acquired Ch 16 A New Life, Part 2—Beast Rampage Ch 17 A New Life, Part 3—Inner Universe Creation Trait Ch 18 A New Life, Part 4—Barely Escaping Death Ch 19 A New Life, Part 5—Farewell, Brinewatch Ch 20 Settling In, Part 1—All I Want for Ascension is You Ch 21 Settling In, Part 2—Searching for Answers Ch 22 Settling In, Part 3—Questions about the Vorens Ch 23 Foundations & Flames, Part 1—Ashport Disposal & Recovery Ch 24 Foundations & Flames, Part 2—Kael's First Demo Job Ch 25 Foundations & Flames, Part 3—Quick Work & Big Pay Ch 26 Foundations & Flames, Part 3—Aura, Force, Ki & Chakra Ch 27 Foundations & Flames, Part 4 Ch 28 Foundations & Flames, Part 5—Date Night Ch 29 Foundations & Flames, Part 6—An Old Friend, New Partner...and Flame? Ch 30 Foundations & Flames, Part 7—Foundations Complete Ch 31 Oh, Master! My Master! Ch 32 AGE, Part 1—AGE & Sabotage Ch 33 AGE, Part 2—Stabilizing the Ashport Simulation Ch 34 AGE, Part 3—Discussing Everything with Lira Ch 35 AGE, Part 4—Beasts & Games Ch 36 AGE, Part 5—The Night Before Lira's Awakening Ch 37 AGE, Part 6—Lira's Surprise Ch 38 ACT, Part 7—It Has to be You Ch 39 AGE, Part 8—AGE Magazine Ch 40 AGE, Part 9—Kael's Interview Ch 41 C-Rank Blood Mend Ch 42 Double First Day Ch 43 War & Plots Ch 44 How to Evolve a Talent Ch 45 Turning the Law into a Weapon Ch 46 Kael's First Hunt, Part 1—The Team Heads Out

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Ch 46 Kael's First Hunt, Part 1—The Team Heads Out

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18th Rotation of the Cyrandros Cycle, 3448 A.E. — Morning, Garrick’s Forge

The forge’s heat hit Kael like a living wall, wrapping around him, filling his lungs with the mingled scents of coal smoke, scorched iron, and oil. The air shimmered above the anvil, the rhythmic clang of Garrick’s hammer striking somewhere behind him like the heartbeat of the shop.

Kael’s own billet sat on the anvil before him—dull red, cooling too quickly. He slid it back into the forge, the tongs rattling faintly in his grip. The fire accepted it greedily, its orange glow licking along the metal’s surface.

Guide it. Don’t break it.

Garrick’s voice from that first lesson echoed in his mind. It wasn’t a metaphor. The metal had a will—not thoughts or feelings, but a kind of deep, slow preference for the shape it wanted to become. Force it the wrong way, and it would twist against you, crack in protest, or simply die under the hammer.

Kael pulled the billet from the heat when it reached a bright, hungry orange. His hammer hovered for a moment, and then—

Strike with your lifeforce, not just your muscle.

He inhaled, drawing up that subtle warmth in his chest, that second heartbeat Garrick had taught him to find. He let it flow down his arm and into the hammer’s head. When the blow landed, the impact rang differently—cleaner, deeper, as though the sound had weight. The metal moved, flattening evenly beneath the strike.

But the moment didn’t last. His next swing came down a shade too soon, the flow faltering, and the billet buckled sideways. He swore under his breath, turning it and trying again.

At first, every strike felt like arguing with a stubborn mule. The billet shuddered under the hammer, resisting here, collapsing there. The harder he tried to force it into line, the more it fought him, twisting its grain, warping into something useless.

The temptation to smash it into compliance was strong.

But Garrick’s warning from yesterday gnawed at him: A blade that’s beaten into shape against its will will never hold true.

He adjusted his grip and stance, trying to listen—not with his ears, but with his hands. The metal’s resistance wasn’t random. It was telling him where it didn’t want to go.

It was maddening.

The billet went back into the fire, came out again, and each time Kael tried to coax rather than dominate. Sometimes it worked—just for a heartbeat. Sometimes the lifeforce flowed cleanly into the hammer, the metal moving almost willingly beneath it. Those moments felt right, as if the hammer, the metal, and his pulse were all in time.

Then he’d lose it. A slip in rhythm, a flicker of doubt, and the billet would twist like a sneer.

Hours passed in that cycle. Heat, strike, resist, adjust. His forearms burned, his palms ached, and the ache in his shoulders felt like someone had lodged hot stones beneath the muscle. Scrap piled up on the bench beside him: bent rods, warped strips, jagged ends that had split like rotten wood.

By the time the forge’s wall-clock marked the half-day, he’d managed only a few stubby nails—misshapen things that would probably bend in a pine board.

He set the hammer down and straightened slowly, rolling his sore shoulders.

From across the room, Garrick quenched a long blade, steam curling around him in white, writhing shapes. He glanced Kael’s way just once before returning to the work of polishing the edge.

“Not bad for a morning,” the old smith said at last.

Kael blinked at the heap of junk on his bench. “Looks like trash.”

“They are,” Garrick agreed without hesitation, still running his cloth along the blade’s length. “But they’re better trash than you made yesterday.” He set the blade down and looked Kael dead in the eye. “Metal remembers the hands that shape it. Keep at it long enough, and it’ll remember yours.”

Kael wasn’t sure if it was praise or a challenge, but the words stuck.

He cleaned his station in silence, the phantom rhythm of the hammer still echoing through his arms. Outside, the cold morning air bit into the sweat on his skin as he stepped into the street.

His muscles were tired, his hands raw, but the day wasn’t over. The Voravex team was waiting. And this time, the thing resisting him wouldn’t be metal—it would be alive.

C11–R18–3448 A.E. — Late Morning, Voravex Hall

Kael stepped off the mana cab into the shadow of Voravex Hall. The building squatted against the wind like a fortress, its thick basalt walls streaked with salt and soot, banners bearing the company’s crest—a stylized claw hooked over a blood-red moon—fluttering in the cold air. The scent of tanned leather, oiled steel, and the faint musk of beasts clung to the stone.

Vara was waiting just inside the gate, one hand on her hip, her short-cropped hair hidden beneath a hood. Her eyes swept him up and down, weighing the hammer-callused hands, the fresh sweat from the forge still on his skin.

“You’re on time,” she said, voice flat. “Good. You remember what I told you?”

Kael nodded. “Stay alive, stay outta your way.”

Her mouth twitched—almost a smirk, almost approval. “And don’t touch anything unless I tell you to. That includes traps, wounded beasts, and my gear.”

Krellbeasts stamped against their harnesses, broad-scaled hides rippling, breath steaming in the morning chill. The hunters moved around them with easy precision, checking straps, testing weapons, murmuring short words that carried no wasted air.

Vara’s voice cut across the yard, low and commanding. “Mount up. We’ve wasted enough light.”

No one argued.

Kael climbed onto the rear bench of the second cart, settling opposite the others. He kept his mouth shut and his eyes sharp, remembering Vara’s orders: Observe. Do not interfere.

The carts creaked forward. Stone streets gave way to gravel, then to dirt. Ashport fell behind them, the walls shrinking against the sky. Ahead, the salt marsh stretched wide and gray, cut with silver veins of water that reflected the flat winter light.

Kael braced himself against the rocking of the cart, frowning. Finally, curiosity pushed past silence. “Why carts? With all the hydrogen haulers and mana-trucks in Ashport, we’re riding in wooden boxes dragged by lizards.”

For a beat, no one answered. The only sound was the rumble of wheels and the krellbeasts’ guttural snorts.

Then Vara’s voice drifted back from the lead cart, iron-hard. “Because hydrogen engines scream to every beast within ten miles. Mana-drives bleed aura like a bonfire. Out here, noise and aura mean ambush.”

Renn, perched near the side rail, added without looking back, “Carts are quiet. Krellbeasts don’t spook easy. They smell like the marsh. Blend in better than steel.”

Jax chuckled from his post. “Besides, when a mana-truck gets stuck in the muck, you’ve got a dead wagon. Krellbeasts? They eat the muck.”

Tor gave no answer, but his steady presence was endorsement enough.

Mara, soft-voiced, added from Kael’s side, “If a cart breaks, wood can be mended. Engines can’t. And when mana fails, so do men who rely on it.” Her gaze didn’t leave the horizon, but the weight of her words sank like stones.

Kael leaned back, gripping the sideboard as the cart rocked. Crude transport, yes—but he understood now. Out here, sleek machines weren’t an advantage. They were bait.

No one spoke again after that. Only the creak of wheels, the hiss of grass in the wind, the hiss of brine-laced air as the marshlands drew nearer.

Finally Vara stood at the front of the lead cart and turned her head just enough for her voice to carry.

“Scouts first. Renn, Jax—you know the drill. The rest hold formation until we reach the delta. No chatter unless it saves your life. Kael—” her eyes flicked back, sharp as knives even from a distance “—you stay out of the machine. We bring down a beast, you eat. Until then, you’re nothing but eyes and ears.”

Kael gave a single nod.

Her gaze lingered a moment, then she turned forward again.

The wagons rolled on, the marsh drawing closer with every jolt of the wheels. The grasses bent in the wind like whispers, the air growing heavier with the scent of brine and decay. Out there, the beasts waited—stronger, faster, and far less forgiving than the metal Kael had wrestled with in the forge.

And for the first time, Kael would see how hunters truly killed.

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